Mar 21, 2008

Something isn't right......

art

Broken promises,
hurtful words,
those words of yours,
destroy anything within
earshot. Pure meanness...
Your world isn't working out for you,
I am sorry
Verbal jabs and punches bruise
the spirit and joy within
Must you take everything?
How much is enough?
Every smile or glimmer of peace
incites your psychosis...
than the mission begins
to suck every ounce of pleasure
that exists around you...
Something isn't right...

4 comments:

Karlynn; said...

I love it. It reminds me of someone, sadly..



I like your blog :)

Lori said...

Thank you....it's always nice to know that you can touch someone else thru what you write...


Lori

sKILLz said...

Loved it.
It reminded me of someone I was with and how they would say alll these things and then when they cooled down they "didnt mean it" and "that wasnt me".

Something isnt right INDEED!

Stay Up

Lori said...

skillz,

Thanks....the messed up part is sometimes when people are getting slick out of their mouth, it's hard to forget what words are said, even though they really are sorry.

Peace...Lori